Reverie Pond – Part 1

15 05 2008

She pushed the reeds to the side just before hopping over the puddle. The clouds above formed a barricade around her distant friend, the Sun, yet his warmth failed her not. It had been 143 days since she had last escaped the confinement of monotony and made it out here. Reverie Pond is what the locals called it as opposed to its undeserved nickname given by the outsiders. (I dare not mention that name; for if you knew firsthand the truth about something or someone and heard wretched rumors and malicious gossip spreading in contradiction, would you allow those falsities the privilege of repetition?) Hearsay had constructed fear of what lay hidden in the water, and so the unfortunate refused to venture past the outskirts of the city. Concrete and asphalt led them to the border but never beyond where the pavement met the gravel.

But she didn’t mind the solitude. Not in the least.

Red rubber flip flops dangled from her fingers. Another small puddle neared but this time she maintained her steady gait and welcomed her feet to the cool mud. The landscape around her had seasoned itself with Spring. Trees extended their arms to leaves once again. An uncaged breeze danced around her, through her, carrying the scent of her favorite bouquet. In the distance, an adjoining field had apparently hung its heavy brown overcoat, grabbing the lightweight green jacket instead in an obvious and appropriate response to warmer weather.

She was the honored guest of all things lovely.

Two steps past the puddle and she stood still and listened quizzically. It was almost unnoticeable but Nature’s heartbeat had gently strengthened from when she had first stepped out of the car an hour and a half before. Yes, she confirmed after a second examination, in fact it had.


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4 responses

16 05 2008
JudiFree.com

Beautiful! and I promise I didn’t speed read through it though I had to fight every urge to do so.

16 05 2008
joshmickelson

“Trees extended their arms to leaves once again. An uncaged breeze danced around her, through her, carrying the scent of her favorite bouquet”

I really like the picture you paint with your words.

16 05 2008
pb&shelley

@Judi – thanks for taking the time! I know it is tough for you amazing speed readers to jump back down to slower reader levels! I feel honored!

@Josh – appreciate the compliment especially since I admire the way you write your fictional blogs.

20 05 2008
thatgirlkate

This is amazing. SO good, Shelley! Or should I call you SHELL(ey) Silverstein? The way you wove together this scene was perfect. I felt like I was the one dangling red flip flops from my fingers. Please tell me that there is a Part 2 in the works!!

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